Elevator Pitch 2



https://youtu.be/-Xeg2AqCZtA
Reflection:
I only received positive feedback from one person on my last Elevator pitch, so I tried to put the same good stuff into pitching the Scüber App.I aimed to be more direct and persuasive in improving my pitch this time. Looking forward to more feedback, in order to keep improving. Thanks enjoy,

Comments

  1. Nicholas ArcuriMarch 17, 2019 at 1:14 PM

    Hey Caroline,
    I like that you kept the main amount of your first elevator pitch within your second elevator pitch. After reviewing both of your elevator pitches I think they were both good but you definitely made a lot of improvements in your second elevator pitch.

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  2. Adi MaimonMarch 18, 2019 at 12:03 PM

    Hi Caroline,
    I think you did a really great job with your elevator pitch. I think your tone and speed were perfect. I had the same issues with recording as you did with the camera moving, but I found it to be helpful leaning my phone on a surface with a back so that it would be stable. I think that would help you make your next elevator pitch that much better, Overall you did an excellent job!

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  3. Hope DoughertyMarch 18, 2019 at 12:58 PM

    Caroline,
    You did a great job in this elevator pitch! I thought it seemed well thought out and you talked at an appropriate speed, not too slow and not too fast. I like how you related it to Uber, something we are all familiar with, so we have a better idea of what your product is. Overall it seems like a great idea that a lot of college students would find useful!

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  4. Zack BelusicMarch 18, 2019 at 6:51 PM

    Hi Caroline,
    Great job on this elevator pitch. I really like your idea of scooter-Uber, or Scuber. This is a really cohesive and welcoming elevator pitch that seems like a real conversation. Not too aggressive, doesn't sound like a scam, and genuinely intrigues the audience. The idea is very resourceful and localized, which will appeal to UF students more than usual because it feels like the service was designed for them specifically.

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  5. Aliana ChuMarch 18, 2019 at 7:00 PM

    Hey Caroline, your pitch sounded clear and concise, it was very well put out. I'm sure your next pitch will also be very good. Your product is sure on its way to success.

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